About Me
- Nicole Hovdestad
- Hi! I'm Nicole, i'm from Sioux Falls, SD. During the year i stay pretty busy with sports, and i am a fan of almost every sport. But i would have to say that extreme sports are my favortie. Hanging out with my friends is a must for me and we always know how to have a good time. This summer was one of the hardest times i've ever been though but i'm hoping college is all that it's made out to be!
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
paper evalve
In my paper i need to make many grammar corrections, and also take the time to rearrange my sentences in a order that is easier to read for the reader. Also i could change the intro to not be so related to what i have seen and delt with and put some more interesting facts about suicide and such. I also saw that i need to add some facts that will actual make people believe that these things will help stop suicide and not just prevent a couple a year. I need to also cut some pieces of info out of my paper because i am being to broad and putting in like two different topics
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment